大學(xué)英語六級作文分析

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大學(xué)英語六級作文分析

　　下面的兩篇英語六級作文，一篇關(guān)于早起，一篇關(guān)于晨練，都是跟早上有關(guān)的。后面附有作文分析，歡迎閱讀!

大學(xué)英語六級作文分析

　　early rising早起

　　ea rly rising is beneficial to us in many ways .

　　first , it helps us to keep fit . we all need f resh air , but air is never so f resh as ea rly in the morning . besides , we can do morning exercises in the open air to improve our health .

　　secondly , early rising helps us in our studies . we learn more quickly in the morning , and find it easier to commit to memory what we learn .

　　thirdly , early rising enables us to plan the work of the day . we can’t work well without a plan . ju st as the plan for the year s hould be made in spring , so the plan for the day should be made in the morning .

　　four thly , early rising gives us enough time to get r eady for a day’s work , such as checking the time- table , collecting the things needed for school .

　　late riser s may find it difficult to cultivate the habit of ea rly rising , even though they know the impor tance of early rising . t hey should r eally try their effor ts to do so , and t ry to unde rstand the saying“ea rly to bed , ea rly to rise makes a man healthy , wealthy and wise .”

　　結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

　　· thematic sentence

　　* ea rly rising — beneficial in many ways

　　· advant ages of early rising

　　* fr es h morning air

　　* fres h memory

　　* plan for the day in the mor ning

　　* enough time for preparing a day’s work

　　· late rise rs should cultivate this habitbe

　　內(nèi)容分析：

　　這是一篇簡單的議論文, 作者論述了早起的好處并對遲起者提出忠告。全文句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡單, 但讀來很流暢。

　　萬能句型：

　　keep fit 保持健康

　　commit to memory what we learn 記住學(xué)過的'東西

　　“ ear ly to bed , ea rly to rise makes a man healthy , wealthy

　　and wise .”“ 早睡早起使人健康、富有和聰明”。

　　morning exercises晨練

　　morning came . the bell rang . i got out of the warm cotton- padded quilt , quickly dressed myself , ran onto the playground , and played on the pa rallel bars .

　　a few moments la ter , more people came . they exercised themselves in various way s . some ran around the track . some played on the horizontal ba r . still some played bas ketball , trying to shoot baskets . a group of girls were walking on the balance beam by turn . a couple of st rongly-built boys made graceful movements on the flying rings . ove r the re, several old men and women did s hadow-boxing .

　　at exactly 6∶30 , music came for people to do exercises to radio music . for ten minutes all the people on the playground we re seen bending down and st raightening up , turning left and right . it’s really a beautiful sight to look at !

　　結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

　　· from bed to the playground

　　· people exercise themselves in various ways

　　·doing morning exe rcises to r adio mu sic

　　內(nèi)容分析：

　　本文既是一篇記敘文又是一篇描寫文。文中記敘了某一天的晨練情景, 因此均用過去時來寫; 同時描寫了晨練時的種種健身活動, 真實而生動, 讀來可有身在其中之感。

　　萬能句型：

　　cotton-padded quilt 棉被

　　pa rallel bar s 雙杠

　　run around the t rack 繞著跑道跑步

　　horizontal bar 單杠

　　s hoot baskets 投籃