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學(xué)習(xí)歷年高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作滿(mǎn)分范文，除了了解高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作考試類(lèi)型，還可以掌握規(guī)范的寫(xiě)作句式，對(duì)2017年高考英語(yǔ)更加胸有成竹。yjbys小編強(qiáng)烈建議同學(xué)們將下面八篇滿(mǎn)分范文進(jìn)行熟讀或者背誦，希望大家在高考中能寫(xiě)出來(lái)的好英語(yǔ)作文。
2016年北京卷(第二節(jié)情景作文：20分)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的“地球日”系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給校刊“英語(yǔ)角”寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。
提示詞：地球日Earth Day
【寫(xiě)作解析】
情景作文話(huà)題常規(guī)，“地球日”系列活動(dòng)屬于保護(hù)環(huán)境的體裁內(nèi)容，屬于常規(guī)考法。公告欄了解活動(dòng)、分工制作、變廢為寶的宣傳活動(dòng)、主題講座都屬于考前練習(xí)過(guò)的場(chǎng)景。故而總體難度適中。
涉及到的具體細(xì)節(jié)參考詞匯：
圖 1：a notice on the bulletin board, Actions for a Greener Earth, arouse students’ interest, learn about the activity
圖 2：be divided into groups, transform waste into delicate articles, devote …to ..
圖 3：hold an activity in the nearby community, promote the awareness of Green Earth to more people, turn waste into wealth, show support, give the articles to neighbors
圖 4：hold a lecture in the auditorium, introduce the whole process of … and the importance of …
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, issue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
2016年新課標(biāo)I卷(滿(mǎn)分25分)1
假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume)。給外教MS Jenkins 寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.
I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年新課標(biāo)Ⅱ卷(滿(mǎn)分25分)2
假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂(lè)部(photography club)將舉辦國(guó)際中學(xué)攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫(xiě)封信。請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括：
1.主題：環(huán)境保護(hù);
2.展覽時(shí)間;
3.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.
The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)睛】
本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)充合情合理，符合生活實(shí)際。建議對(duì)方參加本次展覽的理由符合邏輯：對(duì)方恰好有這一主題的作品。全文句式多樣化，并沒(méi)有一直使用陳述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀請(qǐng)函的特點(diǎn)。
文章中使用了較多的復(fù)合句，如定語(yǔ)從句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate，時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句the last time you visited our school，條件狀語(yǔ)從句If you want to join等。全文沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)句式，體現(xiàn)出很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。
考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放作文
2016年新課標(biāo)Ⅲ卷(滿(mǎn)分25分)3
假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.表示歉意;
2.說(shuō)明原因;
3.另約時(shí)間。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題解析】
2016年浙江卷(滿(mǎn)分30分)4
“Planning is good，but doing is better”是一句英國(guó)名言。請(qǐng)以此為題目用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的短文。
要求如下：
1.簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)這句名言的理解;
2.用一個(gè)具體事例加以說(shuō)明;
3.給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。
注意：1.文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù));2.文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【名師點(diǎn)睛】
本篇范文短小精悍，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，時(shí)態(tài)人稱(chēng)準(zhǔn)確，很好的完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。在文章開(kāi)頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對(duì)plan的理解，同時(shí)引出下文，然后用自己的親身經(jīng)歷表明要將計(jì)劃付諸實(shí)施這點(diǎn)非常重要。在文中作者用到了短語(yǔ)in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短語(yǔ)，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，這些都給樸素的語(yǔ)言帶來(lái)了亮點(diǎn)。
考點(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文
2016年北京卷(第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文：15分)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)歷史很感興趣，并請(qǐng)你介紹一位你喜歡的中國(guó)歷史人物。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 該人物是誰(shuí);
2. 該人物的主要貢獻(xiàn);
3. 該人物對(duì)你的影響。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)不少于50;2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【作文解析】
應(yīng)用文題材新穎，介紹中國(guó)歷史人物又能很好的結(jié)合對(duì)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的考查，綜合考查了考生的日常積累能力，可謂別出心裁。本次小作文并沒(méi)有限定考生必須寫(xiě)某一位歷史人物，但是談及人物的貢獻(xiàn)和對(duì)自己的影響時(shí)，肯定會(huì)涉及大量的詞匯障礙，故應(yīng)用文的難度定然整體提升。
參考詞匯：in the long course of human history, contribute a lot to the development of …, be the pioneer of …, be honored the title of …, have a profound influence on …
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年江蘇卷(滿(mǎn)分25分)7
請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。
In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer”competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the“Future Singer”competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1. 用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文概要;
2. 用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2~3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);
3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文一】
On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.
(150 words)
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文二】
Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.
In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.
In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.
(150 words)
2016年四川卷(滿(mǎn)分25分)8
某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正舉辦“The Season I Like Best”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 你最喜歡的季節(jié);
2. 你喜歡該季節(jié)的兩條理由(如：氣候、景色、活動(dòng)、感受……)。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 題目已為你寫(xiě)好;
3. 行文連貫，語(yǔ)篇完整;
4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文一】
The Season I Like Best
Of the four seasons, I like spring best.
One of the most important reasons is that all kinds of flowers are in bloom and days are full of hope (in) this season. At the same time, I can play outside too! Whether we like riding, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.
Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about spring!
精彩短語(yǔ)和句型
1. in bloom 盛開(kāi)
2. be full of 充滿(mǎn)
3. at the same time 同時(shí);然而
4. be excited about 對(duì)..... 感到興奮/激動(dòng)
5. put on the back burner 把......擱置一邊;延后
6. Whether we like riding, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.
無(wú)論我們喜歡騎自行車(chē)、慢跑或長(zhǎng)時(shí)間散步，春天都能讓我們能去戶(hù)外享受這些活動(dòng)，而這些活動(dòng)在冬天只能被擱置的。
Whether...or...意為“不管…還是…”。allow sb. to do sth.允許某人做某事。That引導(dǎo)的是定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為activities。
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文二】
The Season I Like Best
If you ask me which season I like best, my answer is spring.
On the one hand, spring is the most beautiful season in a year because many kinds of flowers start to come out again, which are colorful. All the places around me are covered with green, making my life full of energy. On the other hand, I like spring because I can enjoy Spring Festival. It is known to us that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, which comes in January or February. On that day, people eat delicious dumplings and wish a good luck. What’s more, I can get lucky money from my parents and buy some books which I like.
精彩短語(yǔ)和句型
1. on the one hand...on the other hand...
一方面……另一個(gè)方面......
2. be covered with 用……覆蓋
3. wish a good luck 祝福好運(yùn)
4. All the places around me are covered with green, making my life full of energy.
句意為：我周?chē)牡胤蕉汲錆M(mǎn)了綠色，讓我的生活充滿(mǎn)了活力。句中現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)。
5. It is known to us that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, which comes in January or February. 眾所周知,春節(jié)是中國(guó)最重要的節(jié)日，它在1月或2月來(lái)臨。
句中it是形式主語(yǔ)，代替后面的that從句，同時(shí)which引導(dǎo)了一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞festival。
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